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6/5/2011 WALT :know how to plan an exposition

19/5/11 WALT :know how to plan an exposition

Desagree position to hard to get the up after a long day the peoples opion the kids are not nice people to be around the efects sports, scouts less training be for it gets dark and cold and get a flu for the game on Saturday and we we will lose the cup and the sheld but other people will do things like dhancing, sing, music, feeding there pets, and doing the lawns and making dinner and running round the block and weghts and things like that. Stress means that people will get very angro, grumpy tired, sleeping in.

where is the rest of your exposition and your self, peer, teacher reflection grid so we can reflect on the success criteria?

This seems like a plan Matthew. Where is your actual exposition?

18/5/11 WALT :know how to plan an exposition

Exposition:Greytown school should finish at 4:00


 * Desagree position. || to hard to get them up after a long day ||  || a ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 18.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">peoples opion. || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 18.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">the kids are not nice poeple to be around lol. ||  ||   ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 18.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">the efects || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 18.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">sports, scouts less training befor it gets dark and cold and get a flu. ||  ||   ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 18.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">stress || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 18.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">angro, grumpy tired, sleeping in. ||  ||   ||

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #ff0000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 18.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Speech Reflection <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">- Projecting so everyone can hear <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">- Speaking clearly without mumbling <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">- Change your tone by emphasizing some words over others. || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">- Using hand gestures <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">- Using your body to enforce what you are saying || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">- Speaking at a steady clear to understand pace <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">- Changing pace to add impact to what you are saying || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">- Know what you want to say and are prepared for the speech || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">- Your audience are caught up in your speech as it is interesting, funny, factual etc and it connects with them. || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">- Facts and opinions to back up what you are saying. Topic vocabulary being used. || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">- People can tell what points you are trying to make and these are linked well and flow nicely. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">- You have hamburger structure with interesting top and bottom. ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #ff0000; font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Voice techniques
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #ff0000; font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Body Language
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #ff0000; font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Pace
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #ff0000; font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Familiarity of speech
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #ff0000; font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Engages the audience
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #ff0000; font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Research
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #ff0000; font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Structure

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #ff00ff; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Strengths: <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #00ff00; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Next Steps:

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">5/5/11

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">I think they crashed because they were DRUNK most people think that they inntmed the driver to drink.The lucky thing is they did not crash into the fox glaser they crashed on the top of it or els the hole glaiser would have tumbled down.A lot of people have know the people form facebook they are Patrick Byrne, 26, from County Wexford, Ireland; Glen Bourke, 18, from Melbourne, Australia; Annita Kirsten, 23, from Germany; and Brad Coker, 24, from Farnborough in the United Kingdom.

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Hi people welcome to my speech my speech about aircraft. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> it might be neadrdy but its cool like how does a airfoil prudecs lift in a scout avation school is relly fun because you get to fly a plain and a glider and mircolight but the down fall is that

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Know what the stucter of a speech <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">We can use the hambuger method to help us write speech.

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Hamberbuger

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Top of bun = appetising introducton. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">each layer of the bun = tasty. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">the bottom of the bun = conclushin. holiding it to gather.

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">2/5/11 <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">W.A.L.T. Know what makes a good speech <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">TIB


 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">cleer voice. ||  ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">confente. ||  ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">no stutterin. ||  ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">very searios. ||  ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">very searios. ||  ||


 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">knowes what he says. ||  ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">got people’s mind thinking. ||  ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">happy to join grabbing sentens. ||  ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">talk about a big thing. ||  ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">pause. ||  ||

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; vertical-align: baseline;">__8/4/11.__ <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; vertical-align: baseline;">__Going to jamboree for the first time.__

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; vertical-align: baseline;">__I wos sitting in the bus with Connor and heaps of some random people who i had know idea about.Connor said just remember we are almost there ya anther 8 and a half hours I said what ever Connor said.4 hours later we arrived at a random corner cafe and had lunch our journey continued an we raced off i meet some new friends but I just felt the urge that we are getting closer to THE JAMBOREE!!!__

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; vertical-align: baseline;">__As we are driving up the hill around the lake our engine stooled so we had to drive down the hill but Lucky we went the wrong way or we would be stuffed.\__

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; vertical-align: baseline;">__12/4/11/__ <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; vertical-align: baseline;">__As we arrived at the JAMBOREE!!!!! we set up the camp then we went to bed me and morgan stayed up all night playing 21 dear.Day 1. In the morning we had breakfast then we went to the activity witch was motorscoters and go carts and buggys then we had dinner then we had 2 and a half houers befor bed. day 3. GET UP said morgan GET UP so i got up and we went the zoo ant in the main hall we had a HUGE PARTY.__

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; vertical-align: baseline;">__day 6 soooo i got up all bored then we walked to the flying fox not your normal 5 meater flying i mean a__ <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 32px; vertical-align: baseline;">__287!!__ <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; vertical-align: baseline;"> __meater flying fox and then i went to the platform 1,2,3, jump so i went like 100 ks x a river. Then we had a go on the motor bikes that was fun then we went rock climbing and i hade a race up a 40 meater wall i won by like 5 minits lolz then we had dinner me and Connor hanged out at the Fuse air there wos hot dogs drinks chips choclate pies and so on then we had a HUGE party at the hub and 6,538 people there it wos epic the bed.__

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; vertical-align: baseline;">__Day 9!! the last fun day what so just chilled that day it wos very quite so me and Connor went to the bigest party in the world like bigst all my frinds gave me a big hug and we partyed then bed all ready wow.__ <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; vertical-align: baseline;">__Day 10 The day came sadily i pacted my bags and then i hoped in my mums car and went to my grannys then we went to topuw and the army museum oh the houres fly by NOT then we unpact the car and i told my mum and dad all about the Jamboree.__

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 24px; vertical-align: baseline;">__the end.__

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 24px; vertical-align: baseline;">__By Matthew.__

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #ff0000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">-Recount Reflection: <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">We will <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">use the grid below to help us reflect on your piece of writing:
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Theme: || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Self || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #0000ff; font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Peer  || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #9900ff; font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Teacher  ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Personal voice || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">yes || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">yes ||   ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Attention grabbing introduction || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">yes || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">yes ||   ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Different sentence starters || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">yes || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">yes ||   ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Full Stops and capital letters in the correct places and other punctuation as needed such as speech marks, commas and apostrophes || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">yes and no || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">sometimes ||   ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">A feeling of suspense is created in the writing || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">yes || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">yes ||   ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Who, what, where, when, why and how information is included || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">yes || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">yes ||   ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Personal thoughts and feelings described. || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">yes || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">yes ||   ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Senses used and described || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">yes || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">yes ||   ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Writing makes a picture in the audiences mind || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">yes || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">yes ||   ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Language features to describe things || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">yes || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">yes ||   ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Conclusion that summarises your feelings. || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">yes || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">yes ||   ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Structured into paragraphs || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">yes || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">yes ||   ||

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #9900ff; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">3P

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #ff00ff; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Strengths: Mostly evrything. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #9900ff; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Matthew you have done a great job organising your recount. The vents are in order and it is structured into paragraphs well. You have given people the who, what, where, when, why and how information well.

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #00ff00; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Next steps: <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Full Stops and capital letters in the correct places and other punctuation as needed such as speech marks, commas and apostrophes <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #9900ff; font-family: Comic Sans MS; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">. Your next step is to add some more description to the events describe how things looked or felt. It is better to do 1 day well that to try and pack in all the days, otherwise it ends up like a shopping list of events

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Read the two recounts below, they both have really good suspense.....they have picked language to create that feeling and ‘hook us in’. Highlight the language you think they use to create this feeling.

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Its <span style="background-color: #ffff00; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Coming

<span style="background-color: #ffff00; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">It’s coming closer and closer <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">, <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">its great point shinning <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">like the pinnacle of the Empire State Building <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">at dawn. <span style="background-color: #ffff00; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Closer <span style="background-color: #ffff00; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">and closer. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">I grit my teeth, <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">ready for the sharp needle to pierce my skin <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">and to dive for my vein. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">My skin starts to crawl <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">as though they really is something under <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">there. <span style="background-color: #ffff00; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">It’s only centimetres away, <span style="background-color: #ffff00; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">getting closer by the second. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">My nails dig into my palms like blades. <span style="background-color: #ffff00; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">I hold my breath. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">My face is turning blue. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">My eyes are popping. <span style="background-color: #ffff00; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">I wait <span style="background-color: #ffff00; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">and wait for the pain. <span style="background-color: #ffff00; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Then I hear <span style="background-color: #ffff00; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">the nurse say, <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">“All done-you can go now.”

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">New Millennium

<span style="background-color: #ffff00; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Today was the day. Today was the day <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> I could shoot spitballs through the crowd. Tonight was the night I could stay up to midnight. <span style="background-color: #ffff00; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Tonight was the last night of 1999. Tonight was the start of the new millennium. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">As usual for any celebration, <span style="background-color: #ffff00; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Mum packed the car, Dad drove, I pitched the tent, <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> my little sister screamed and cried because she couldn’t take her dolls, <span style="background-color: #ffff00; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">and soon enough my sister dominated the tent! <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> There were lots of people there <span style="background-color: #ffff00; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">(even Uncle Adrian was there and he HATES parties.) <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">When the sun was still up, I spotted a canoeist out at sea from the top of a hill. I told Dad. He just smiled, got the launcher, and loaded it with an orange. <span style="background-color: #ffff00; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">I started jumping up and down. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> This was going to be a REAL crack-up! Dad trudged to the top of the hill and pointed it at the canoeist and. <span style="background-color: #ffff00; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">BANG! The orange went zooming towards the canoeist and.......SPLAT! <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> I looked through the binoculars and saw something I would never forget! The orange had hit the man on the head! Lucky for him, the canoe was made for the sea because it just simply tipped the covered-with-orange-juice and shocked man overboard!!! <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Mums said I could sleep under the stars tonight. <span style="background-color: #ffff00; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> It was 11:59, and there were only 5 seconds until midnight. The radio was screaming 3, 2, 1! The grown-ups gave a yelp and started dancing. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> The perfect time for spitballs! By the end of the party, everyone went home with dried paper on their backs. (A world record!) I got a growling, but at least it was fun!

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">30/3/11

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Personal writing <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 24px; vertical-align: baseline;">__World war II__ <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 24px; vertical-align: baseline;">__Kjk’lΩµflkkj’z≈˚vj;lk’p.A.D.I.F.jmv’pioaegmr’pijaw’__

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Hay do you have a clip of ammo dempsy said nikle eye. No all out we have to raido command so we can call the bommer so we can get the hell outta here please end this mayheam hay SOLIDER get over here.

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">30/3/11

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Task:Write a letter to Tane at heath camp.

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Hay Tane i know that we are not friends and all i really hope that every thing is cool hope no one is hearting your feelings but we did the beep test which was boring we did tec and other things so i really miss you hope you can be back soon so i can tell that to your face buddy really really miss you when you get back you will tell us about your trip and you can play with us because you have been there for me so at tec we sow things together and wood works you cut wood and make ukuleles.I hope you have a SUPER time but i hope you are refreshed

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">yours sensually .Matthew.

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">16/3/2011 <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #ff0000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">WALT: Author a piece of writing by working in a group to make changes to improve a piece of writing. <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #ff0000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">TIB: Many people give feedback on written pieces before they are printed. <span style="background-color: #ff0000; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Mystery piece of writing

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">I was finaly <span style="background-color: #ff0000; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">finally <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">on my way <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; vertical-align: baseline;">__My way to.__ <span style="background-color: #ff0000; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">To <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> the other side of the world to visit my long lost pet parrot squaky <span style="background-color: #ff0000; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Squaky <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">. I was so amazed by the fact that I was able to vist <span style="background-color: #ff0000; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">visit <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> my long lost pet parrot <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #ff0000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">and <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #ff0000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">A <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">lso the fact that my mum and dad had actualy <span style="background-color: #ff0000; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">acutely <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">paid for the trip <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000099; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; vertical-align: baseline;">[|__over.__] <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #ff0000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">at all! <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">I couldn’t stand it <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #ff0000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">anymore <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> I <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #ff0000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">instantly sprung <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; vertical-align: baseline;">__got__ <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> out of my seat and went up to the front of the plane <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; vertical-align: baseline;"> __to__ <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #ff0000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">and <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> ask <span style="background-color: #ff0000; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">ed <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> the pilot if he could go any faster. He said that he could take a short cut but he would have to drop of the few passengers that were on the plane. Quicker than I thought we had nobody on board and on our way. I was going crazy knowing that I <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">I would be getting to my long lost pet parrot quicker. I went back <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; vertical-align: baseline;"> __and sat__ <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #ff0000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">to sit <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">down in <span style="background-color: #ff0000; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">on <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> my seat. BANG! I woke with a shock and looked out the window and we were <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; vertical-align: baseline;">__over__ <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #ff0000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">on <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> a desert. LuckiIy looked out the window because I saw that the planes wing had caught fire. I imediatly went and told the captain. He said he had heard the bang and already noticed the problem. He told me to go back to my seat and get into the evasive manouver. I thougth I was going to die but I didn’t and I nearlly had a heart because it was the most thrilling thing I’ve ever done. I went walking because the captain was dead and soon came to ginourmouse sand hill. I climed it and I was sweating so hard when I got to the top. I decided to take a look around. I saw a lush cool oasis with buildings on the side but very far away. I saw a Dark green tree that I could clime to see if any one was at the buildings or in the oasis waters. When I got to the top of the tree I notice that there the branches were sticking up over the top of the bush. I went and snaped one off for a walking stick it was rought wood and gave me lot’s of splinters. I ditched it and got a drink. Then I went and visited the buildings.

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">There was a cat there and it was so soft and furry. I had a closer look and it seemed to be hugging a turtle. The turtle seemed to be all hard and firm so I wondered why they were hugging each other. I thouht the logical explanation was that the cat was blind and it was attacking a bird/turtle and had fallen asleep on top of it. The owners come home and ask I tellthem about my plane crash. They ask if I wont to stay for tee. I say i’d love to.

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">They ask if I can go out and get some mushrooms from the garden so I go out to the garden and look around for some mushrooms. Theres no mushrooms in sight so I go a little deeper in to there garden and all of a sudden I’m in a rain forest and there’s some kind of fungi on the side of a tree they looked so moist and perfect and then when I picked them they were so squishy and spongey I decided to take these back to the house. I was about to leave when I heard a fimilar squaking sound coming from behind me.

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">I quickly turned around and there flying down from the trees was squawky. He looked so amazzing like nothing I ever amagined. He had slim bright coulered wings and his fas was a bright happy yellow with black spots. We began our journey home.

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #ff0000; font-family: Courier New; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">WALT: Use descriptive adjectives in our writing <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #ff0000; font-family: Courier New; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">TIB:It makes a picture in our audiences mind

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">My four picture story 3/3-9-3

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> Ja-shaka and his wife viki she is a lumens blue but Ja-shaka is green and black. Viki where are you cried Ja-shaka from deep in beneath the black smoke of the wild fire where’s sampson muffin the cat got him where’s my spoon no time to get the spoon viki but it’s magic home tree got the spoon go go go as thay zoom like rockes thru the air as viki brushers the dirt of Ja-shaka she says lets get sampson.

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">There as thay zoom and the cat roled with a mighty big yawn thay miss Sampson we failed no.God help us we need to get smapson meowww that cat is waking up thay grab sampion thay swoop and crash dawn in a beach but with no walter besides the tiny lake.

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">As sizzling hot forrest f

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> Exposition Moderation 14/2/2011 <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">WALT:we are assessing our skills in writing an exposition.

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">“Should Greytown School be offering extra curricula activities

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> Planing.I think we should have it because we disrv the same rights as other schools.

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Writing.We should get Music dance drama tec wood works class time and lots more. Because the school gets kinda boring after a long time because some of the new people want to have a fresh new start.

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #9900ff; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Next steps: <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #9900ff; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Use persuasive language features. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #9900ff; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Write more to persuade people. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #9900ff; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">An introduction and a conclusion.

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">As sizzling hot forrest floor but both of them needed walter so thay went to a forrest and got some mushrooms for a snack thay gobboled the mushrooms up and thgay saw a new home were thay can live so thay lived happly ever after.

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">A four picture story 3/3-9-3

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> Ja-shaka and his wife viki she is a lumens blue but Ja-shaka is green and black. Viki where are you cried Ja-shaka from deep in beneath the black smoke of the wild fire where’s sampson muffin the cat got him where’s my spoon no time to get the spoon viki but it’s magic home tree got the spoon go go go as thay zoom like rockes thru the air as viki brushers the dirt of Ja-shaka she says lets get sampson.

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">There as thay zoom and the cat roled with a mighty big yawn thay miss Sampson we failed no.God help us we need to get smapson meowww that cat is waking up thay grab sampion thay swoop and crash dawn in a beach but with no walter besides the tiny lake.

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">As sizzling hot forrest f

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Version:1.0 StartHTML:0000000202 EndHTML:0000006851 StartFragment:0000002987 EndFragment:0000006815 SourceURL:file://localhost/Users/matthew/Documents/writing/Matthew%20FOUR%20PICTURE%20STORY.doc <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">A four picture story

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> Ja-shaka and his wife viki. She is a lumens blue but Ja-shaka is green and black. Viki where are you cried Ja-shaka from deep in beneath the black smoke of the wild fire. where’s sampson muffin the cat got him where’s my spoon no time to get the spoon .viki but it’s magic home tree got the spoon go go go as thay zoom like rockes thru the air .viki brushers the dirt of Ja-shaka she says lets get sampson.

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">There as thay zoom and the cat roled with a mighty big yawn thay miss Sampson we failed no.God help us we need to get smapson meowww that cat is waking up thay grab sampion thay swoop and crash dawn in a beach but with no walter besides the tiny lake.

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">As sizzling hot forrest floor but both of them needed walter so thay went to a forrest and got some mushrooms for a snack thay gobboled the mushrooms up and thgay saw a new home were thay can live so thay lived happly ever after.

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">For Mathew to edit.

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> “Bird, what an earth are you doing with that spoon!?” <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> Bird cocked his head, satisfied with Cat’s reaction. The animals, Turtle and Cat, were lounging on the warm earth, soaking up as much heat as possible. “I’m Eating you for lunch, that’s what!” Bird replied. Cat rolled his eyes and stretched, he knew now it was only one of Bird’s loony attempts. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> “My dear, Bird, you couldn’t fit me in your stomach.” <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> Bird scowled. Why was Cat always such a know-it-all? He could at least pretend to join in with his game. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> “Fine.” Snapped Bird. “In that case I shall eat Turtle.” <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> Turtle looked up from his snooze, as usual not quite awake. “Whooo...?” <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> “Bird.” Cat said. “I do not think you should eat Turtle.” He pawed Turtle closer into a bear hug. “Turtle is spiritual. You’ll go to hell if you eat him.” <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> “That’s not true,” huffed Bird. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> “Whooo?” Turtle said again, yawning. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> “Oh but it is true!” Cat chortled, “remember the consequences rule - remember what happened when you ate slug! You hadn’t known he was a Buddha, had you?” <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> “Shut up.” Said Bird. “If I can’t eat either of you...” Bird dropped the spoon with a clatter, “I will eat those mushrooms. YUM!” <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> Cat’s eyes darted to the clump of mushrooms growing out from the side of the only tree in their garden. His face became pale. “BIRD NO! They’re poisonous! You know they are.” <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> “I know no such thing,” said Bird flitting down to the mushrooms, still moist and drippy from the early morning dew. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> “Bird, this is not funny!” began Cat, “you can not...” <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> “I can and I will,” Bird trilled, “I’m hungary.” Before Cat’s horrified eyes, Bird swooped in and took a peck at the mushrooms. He looked at Cat and swallowed defiantly. Bird was just about to go in for another peck, when his beak suddenly opened wide and a strangled croak escaped his tiny throat. His wings drooped and his body flipped belly up, before tumbling earthward in an elegant helicopter-like twirl. His eyes pinged open as he touched the ground. “Remember me dear friends,” he gurgled. His eyes then rolled back in his head before finally closing. A pretty green and yellow feather floated down, landing next to him as he lay, legs skyward, toes curled. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.6667px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> “TURTLE! DO SOMETHING!” Cat screeched in horror. Turtle sighed and twitched in his sleep.

My story gilliy snipers will be out soon

A four picture story
==Ja-shaka and his wife viki. She is a lumens blue but Ja-shaka is green and black. Viki where are you cried Ja-shaka from deep in beneath the black smoke of the wild fire. where’s sampson muffin the cat got him where’s my spoon no time to get the spoon .viki but it’s magic home tree got the spoon go go go as thay zoom like rockes thru the air .viki brushers the dirt of Ja-shaka she says lets get sampson.==

==There as thay zoom and the cat roled with a mighty big yawn thay miss Sampson we failed no.God help us we need to get smapson meowww that cat is waking up thay grab sampion thay swoop and crash dawn in a beach but with no walter besides the tiny lake.==

==As sizzling hot forrest floor but both of them needed walter so thay went to a forrest and got some mushrooms for a snack thay gobboled the mushrooms up and thgay saw a new home were thay can live so thay lived happly ever after.==